Y'all, I'm hard at work on my military series while I'm in between Presents, and today I decided to share an excerpt with you. I've loved this story for a long time. It's undergone a few revisions, as I learned how better to tell a story, and looks almost nothing like it did when it was a Golden Heart finalist in 2008. It's my hope to make this story available in the next couple of months. There's still work to be done, but I will get it done.
Sharing this extended excerpt with you today is one way to keep me motivated. If I promise you I'm working on it, and you like what you read, how can I break that promise to make it available as soon as possible?
In this story, which has been called HOT PURSUIT for a very, very long time (even before Suz Brockmann published her story by the same title), a sexy Special Forces commander and the hometown girl whose heart he once broke team up to save her sister from a killer.
I've given you the prologue and first chapter today. I hope you enjoy it!
PROLOGUE
Two months agoβ¦
Something was wrong.
It wasnβt anything obvious, but Captain Matthew Girard felt it in his gut nonetheless. It was an itching sensation across his skin, a buzzing in his belly. Perhaps it was simply the weight of this mission pressing down on him. Though STAG 10 always performed critical missions, this one was even more so. Failure was not an option.
Beside him, Kevin MacDonald lay in the sand, his camo clad form as still as marble until the moment he turned his head and caught Mattβs eye.
Kevβs hand moved. Doesnβt feel right, he signaled.
No, Matt signaled back. Count on Kev to pick up on it too.
βItβs awful quiet in that compound.β Jim Matuzakiβs voice came through the earpiece a few moments later.
βYeah,β Matt answered into the mic attached to his helmet. Almost as if the tangos inside knew that STAG 10 was coming and had abandoned the compound.
The stone structure thirty meters distant rose two stories high and lacked windows. The roof was flat to enable gunmen to look out on the surrounding territory and defend their position.
But there were no gunmen. Not tonight.
In the surveillance photos, the gunmen were so many theyβd stood out against the pale roof like a porcupineβs quills. And nowβ¦
Nothing.
Though it was quiet here, gunfire exploded in the distance at regular intervals. A pitched battle between a pocket of enemy forces and a Ranger battalion raged a few miles away. STAG 10βs mission was quieter, but no less deadly.
They were here for Jassar ibn-Rashad, the rumored new mastermind and heir to the now deceased Freedom Force leader Al Ahmad. But this mission was different. Usually, they killed the target. Tonight, they were extracting him. The bastard was wanted higher up the chain, and Matt didnβt question orders from the Pentagon. They wanted him, they were getting him.
Matt and his team had planned the mission to kidnap ibn-Rashad for weeks. Down to the last damn detail. And then theyβd gotten word just a few days ago that ibn-Rashad was moving to this location. It was their best chance to get him, so theyβd pressed forward with the op.
The intel was good. Damn good. And their contact had been reliable on more than one occasion. Nothing heβd ever told them hadnβt checked out.
But this time?
The bad feeling in Mattβs gut was getting stronger by the second. Heβd thought the kid seemed more nervous than usual the last time heβd gone to meet with him. The kid had always been nervous, but heβd seemed to trust Mattβs word. And Matt had trusted him as much as he was able. Trust, but verify.
Which the CIA had done. All the chatter indicated that ibn-Rashad had moved to this location. Nothing indicated that the Freedom Force had any idea they were being targeted. And in spite of the niggling feeling heβd had about the whole thing, Matt had chosen to press forward with the op.
Just then, a light flashed up on the roof and blinked out again. Male voices carried in the night, followed by a bark of laughter.
βTwo men,β Marco San Ramos said over the headset. βSmoking.β
Marco and Jim were closer and had a better view through the glasses.
βRichie?β Jimβs voice came through the headset again, calling Matt by his team name.
He knew what the other man was asking. What they were all waiting for. In another location close by, Billy Blake and Jack Hazelton also waited for the signal to go or to retreat. The timeline was tight, and if they didnβt go in now, theyβd have to scrub the mission to make it to the extraction point on time. They had precisely twenty minutes to infiltrate the compound, kill the tangos, and extract ibn-Rashad.
If they were going in.
βMission is a go,β he said, making the split-second decision in spite of the acid roiling in his belly. What if they didnβt get a second chance at this? Lives hung in the balance with ibn-Rashad remaining free. This mission had always been risky, but what did they ever do that wasnβt? βRepeat, mission is a go.β
βHoo-ah,β Jim replied, giving the standard Army acknowledgement. The rest of the men chimed in. Seconds later, two cracks rang into the night. And then Billyβs voice came over the headset. βTargets on roof neutralized.β
Jack βHawkβ Hazelton could always be counted on to make the difficult shots. The dude was probably the best sharpshooter Matt had ever seen.
Everything went like clockwork from that point on. They converged on the compound from their separate locations. Kev set a charge on the door and then it exploded inward. Billy Blake tossed a flash-bang into the opening. It went off with a loud crack, the light flaring as bright as a nuclear flash for a split second. Whoever was in that room would be blind and disoriented after that baby went off.
The team rushed through the door, going right and left in succession, guns drawn as pandemonium reigned among the unsuspecting terrorists. STAG 10 worked like a well-oiled machine. Each man knew where to shoot instinctively, could have done so blindfolded if necessary.
Within seconds, the terrorists lay dead and gunpowder hung heavy in the air, along with the odors of smoke and stale sweat.
Sweat also trickled down the inside of Mattβs assault suit. He didnβt have time to be uncomfortable. Instead, he and Kev raced up the steps along with Marco and Jim, searching for ibn-Rashad, while Billy and Jack secured the perimeter.
A methodical sweep of the rooms proved futile.
βHeβs not here,β Marco spat. βThereβs no one else.β
βGoddamn,β Matt swore. The skin-crawling sensation heβd had from the beginning of this op was now a full-blown assault on his senses.
Kev looked at him, his face bleak behind the greasepaint, his eyes saying everything Matt was thinking.
Jassar ibn-Rashad was supposed to be here. Heβd been reported here as of this afternoon, in fact. There was a price on the manβs head, and no reason to move from this locationβ¦unless heβd been tipped off they were coming.
Sonofabitch.
βDo another sweep for information. West side. Three minutes, and weβre out,β Matt ordered.
βHoo-ah,β Marco said. He and Jim headed for the west side of the house while Matt and Kev split up to cover the rooms on the east end. Matt swept into each room, weapon drawn, helmet light blazing. There was nothing. No papers, no computers, no media of any kind. Nothing they could use to determine what ibn-Rashad was planning next.
He hit the hall again, met up with Kev, who shook his head.
Jim and Marco arrived next, empty handed. The four of them pounded down the stairs. Another quick sweep of the rooms on the ground floor, and they were back into the night with Billy and Jack, running for the extraction point five miles away.
They hadnβt gone a mile when bullets blasted into the air beside them. A hot, stinging sensation bloomed in Mattβs side. He kept running anyway. Until they crested the dune theyβd been traveling up and came face to face with a series of rocket-propelled grenade launchers pointed right in their faces.
Fuck. The mission was definitely a bust, and in the worst way possible.
CHAPTER ONE
Rochambeau, Louisiana
βMm-mm, look at that Girard boy, all grown up and better looking than a man ought to be,β said one of the ladies under the row of hairdryers.
Evie Bakerβs heart did a somersault. Matt Girard. Dear God. βCareful,β Stella Dupre yelped as warm water sprayed against the side of the sink and hit her in the face.
βSorry,β Evie replied, shifting the hose. She was a chef not a shampoo girl, but she didnβt suppose that distinction mattered anymore since the bank now owned her restaurant. Shampoo girl in her mamaβs beauty salon was just about the only job she could get right now.
Mama glanced over at her, frowning even as the snip-snip of scissors continued unabated. The ladies in the salon swung to look out the picture window as Matt strode along, and the chatter ratcheted up a notch. The odor of perming solution and floral shampoo surrounded Evie like a wet blanket, squeezing her lungs. Her breath stuttered in her chest.
Matt Girard.
She hadnβt seen him in ten years. Not since that night when heβd taken her virginity and broken her heart all at once. Sheβd known he was back in townβhell, the whole town had talked of nothing else since his arrival yesterday. Sheβd even known this moment was probably inevitable, except that sheβd been planning to do her best to avoid all the places he might be for as long as possible.
βHeard he got shot out there in Iraq,β Mrs. Martin said as Evieβs mama rolled a lock of grey hair around a fat pink curler.
βYes indeed, got a Purple Heart,β Mama said. βThe senator was right proud, according to Lucy Greene.β
βThatβs not what I heard!β Joely Hinch crowed. βMiss Mildred told me heβs being kicked out of the Army because he didnβt obey orders.β
βFiddlesticks,β Mrs. Martin said. βThat boy bleeds red, white, and blue. Same as his daddy and every last Girard that ever was born up in that big house.β
Joely crossed her arms, looking slightly irritated to be contradicted. βYou just wait and see,β she said smugly.
βShush up, yβall,β Mama said. βI think heβs coming in.β
Evieβs heart sank to her toes. She finished Stellaβs shampoo and wrapped her hair in a towel. βIβm not tipping you, Evangeline,β Stella said with a sniff. βYou have to be more careful than that.β
βI know,β Evie replied. βAnd I donβt blame you at all.β Except, of course, she desperately needed every penny she could get if she hoped to escape this town ever again. It wasnβt that Rochambeau was badβitβs that it was bad for her. She glanced out the window.
Matt was definitely coming this way.
Magazines snapped open in a flurry as the ladies tried to appear casually disinterested in the six-foot-two hunk of muscle about to open the glass door. More than one pair of eyes peeked over the top of the glossy pages as he stepped up to the sidewalk from the street.
No way in hell was she sticking around for this. It wouldnβt take these ladies more than a few moments to remember the scandalous rumors about her and Matt, and she didnβt want to be here when they did.
βIf youβll excuse me, I have to get some things out of the back,β she said. Without waiting for a reply, she strode toward the stockroom. Rachel Mayhew, Mamaβs regular shampoo girl, looked up and smiled as she passed. Rachel was only twenty, so she probably didnβt know about Evieβs disastrous night with Matt. Or maybe she did considering the way this town talked.
Evie wasnβt sticking around to find out. As if life hadnβt beaten her up enough already.
A month ago, sheβd said goodbye to her dream. It still hurt. Her lovely little bistro in Florida was now in the bankβs hands, and all because sheβd trusted a man. A man whoβd shared her bed, robbed her blind, and ran off with another woman. The authorities thought that David had ties to organized crime and that heβd been skimming money along with other, more nefarious schemes. She hated to think about it. Evangelineβs had been everything sheβd ever wanted when sheβd shaken off the dust of this one-horse town and gone to cooking school a few years ago.
But here she was again, back in Rochambeau and washing hair in her mamaβs salon, just like when sheβd been in high school. Loser. All she wanted was to get out again at the first opportunity. Before that loser feeling wrapped around her throat and squeezed the rest of her dreams away.
Matt reached for the door, and Evie darted behind the stockroom curtain. Her heart slammed against her ribs as the tinkling bell announced his arrival. She turned to lean against the doorjamb, pushed the rose-print polyester aside with one finger. She was being silly. He wasnβt here because of her. He was here because his sister had sent him on some errand or other for her wedding.
Hell, he probably wouldnβt even recognize Evie if he ran smack into her.
Evie frowned. She damn sure recognized him. Her eyes slid down his body, back up again. He was still something to look at.
Something easy on the eyes and hard on the senses.
Heβd changed in ten years, but some things were the same. That cocky swagger as heβd approached the shop. Heβd always walked like his daddy owned all the oil in the Gulf of Mexico. Which he damn near did. The Girards had been Rochambeauβs wealthiest family for as long as anyone could remember.
Mattβs dark hair was cut very short, and his shoulders were much broader than when heβd been seventeen. The fabric of his white cotton T-shirt stretched across a wide chest packed with muscle. His bare arms made her throat go dry.
Something quivered deep inside her. Something hot and dark and secret. Evie squashed the feeling ruthlessly.
He pushed a hand through his hair, every muscle of his torso seeming to bunch and flex with the movement. She would have sworn she heard a collective sigh from the ladies in the salon. Rachel absently ran water in her sink, cleaning out the soap bubbles from the last shampoo. When she got too close to the edge, the water sprayed up into her face.
Evie would have laughed if she too werenβt caught up in Mattβs every move. Sheβd adored him ten years ago, worshipped him from afar until the night sheβd screwed up her courageβthanks to a single shot of liquorβand asked him to be her first.
What a mistake. Not because sex with him had been awful. No, itβd been pretty exciting all things considered. It was what had happened afterward that ruined it for her.
βAfternoon, ladies,β Matt said, tipping his head to them.
βAfternoon,β they murmured in unison, voices sugary and lilting, eyes assessing and cataloging him.
βMiz Breaux,β he said as he took her motherβs hand and kissed it like a courtier.
βOh, shoot.β She smacked him playfully on the shoulder. βWhat do you want? Donβt you know this is a beauty parlor? Sidβs Barber Shop is on Main Street.β
βWell, maβam,β he said, grinning that devil-may-care grin of his Evie remembered so well. βI figured Old Sid canβt see so well anymore and Iβm still fond of my ears. Iβd much rather have a ladyβs touch, if you know what I mean.β
βOh my,β Mama said. Then she giggled. Giggled.
Evie rolled her eyes. No wonder she couldnβt pick a decent man. She came by the defect naturally. Mama had been divorced three times. Sheβd gone back to using her maiden name after the second one in order to avoid confusion. Evie had her daddyβs last name, her sixteen-year-old sister had a different name, and Mama had yet another one.
But at least sheβd never let a man ruin her business, a mean voice said. Or turn her into the town joke.
Shut up.
βYou donβt even look like you need a haircut,β Mama was saying.
He scrubbed a hand over the nape of his neck. βMy sister thinks I do. And itβs her wedding.β
Mama giggled again. What was it about that man that turned even the smartest woman into an airhead? βWell, we canβt let Christina be disappointed then, can we? But youβll have to wait until I finish with Mrs. Martin.β
Mama gestured toward the pink vinyl seats in the front of the shop, and Matt gave her that famous Girard smile that used to melt the female hearts of Rochambeau High School. Evie felt a little hitch in her heart, in spite of herself.
Why did he still have to be so damn good-looking? Was it too much to ask for him to be balding, growing a potbelly? Apparently so. Mother Nature was cruel.
βSure thing, Miz Breaux.β
Before heβd taken three steps toward the waiting area, Mama said, βYou remember my daughter, Evangeline, donβt you? She was a year behind you in school.β
Evieβs heart crashed into her ribs. The ladies in the shop grew quiet while they waited for his answer. She knew what they were thinking. What they were waiting for. Why should it bother her what they thought? What any of them thought?
It had been ten years ago, and it didnβt matter anymore. She was grown up. Matt was grown up. Who cared?
Except thatβs not how Rochambeau worked, and she knew it. It might have been ten years, but heβd humiliated her. Heβd broken her heart and tossed her to the wolves when she wasnβt prepared to deal with the consequences of her actions. Not that anyone knew for sure what had happened, but the rumors were usually enough in Rochambeau.
Bastard.
βYes maβam, I sure do. How is she?β He didnβt sound in the least bit remorseful. But why would he? Heβd gotten what he wanted out of the deal. Sheβd been the one left to pick up the pieces of her life once heβd gone.
βEvieβs great,β Mama announced. βBeen living in Florida, but sheβs home now. Maybe you can talk to her while you wait. Yβall can catch up.β
Evieβs stomach plummeted to her toes. Oh no. No, no, no. What if she went into the bathroom and refused to come out? Or just quietly slipped out the back door and disappeared for a couple of hours? It was time for her lunch break, andβ
Coward. Evie stiffened her spine. She wasnβt running away. If it werenβt now, itβd be some other time. She couldnβt avoid him forever. And far better to get this over with in public, while she could maintain her dignity and show the good people of Rochambeau there was nothing whatsoever to talk about.
βThatβd be great,β he said in an aw shucks way she didnβt buy for a second. He might talk smooth and act all friendly and gee-whiz maβam, but she knew better. God, did she know better.
βGood,β her mother said as if it was the best idea in the world, her gaze sweeping the shop. βShe was here just a minute ago. Evie? Evie?β
βShe went in the back,β Stella offered with what Evie was convinced was an edge of glee. Bitch.
Right. There was nothing Evie could do except face the music. Because there was no way on earth sheβd ever let Matt Girard humiliate her again. Sheβd learned the hard way, but at least sheβd learned.
βIβm right here, Mama,β she said, whipping off her smock and pushing back the curtain.
Lynn –
Very exciting that you are starting a military series. Congrats.
Looking forward to reading it.
Thanks, Cyn! π
Oh Lynn
Awesome!! Pretty please finish!!! I will be waiting on pins and needles.
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Thanks, Ginger! Glad you enjoyed it! π
Loved the excerpt Lynn!
You mentioned Suzanne Brockmann and I’d say if the rest of the book is as good as this, Saab has serious competition on her hands π
Thanks so much, Sasha! I love Suz B and think she’s the bomb. I would love to be even half as good as her!! So glad you enjoyed the excerpt!!
I heard some friends talking about this on the subway today. I love it!
Wow, seriously?! That totally makes my day. π
Sounds amazing!!! Can’t wait to read it!
Thank you!!! π